Ludwig Kakumei brainstorm...

**tenjou_sama** · August 28th, 2003, 05:36 PM

Yep, as a matter of fact I mailed it back to Risu-chan Monday, but forgot to mention it.

**Risu-chan** · September 8th, 2003, 07:40 PM

^^;;; It's been here for a while, I just haven't had time to get all the way through a chapter yet. (crazy school-starting-up-ness...)

Will try hard to get something finished by this weekend so I can take a semi-official short fanfic-writing break sometime soon... ^_~

**tenjou_sama** · September 8th, 2003, 09:16 PM

I'm just glad to know that you have it, and that it didn't get lost XD

**Risu-chan** · September 14th, 2003, 10:20 PM

^^;;; These stories are LOOOOOOOONNNNG.

Carole, would it be OK if I sent you the translation in installments? That way I could feel like I was actually accomplishing something without having to get through all 60-or-so pages at once...

plus I'm pretty sure at least two of the three of them are going to need to be distributed subdivided like Blood Hound was, too...

**Risu-chan** · September 15th, 2003, 12:37 AM

You guys are going to LOVE Ludwig Kakumei. It's completely fall-on-the-floor hilarious -- in an incredibly sick, twisted, dark, and demented way... ^^;;;;;;;;;

Sample exchanges:

King to Prince Lui after a long and tangled lecture about how he's been consorting with too many of the wrong kinds of women: "So take that face of yours that's only good for one thing, and seduce that princess and bring her back here! Otherwise I'll never let you set foot in this country again!"
Prince Lui: "If I might be so bold as to venture a single word in defense of my honor..."
(brace for impact)
Prince Lui: "My face isn't my only useful feature. It's *magnificent* when I take all my clothes off too..."

And I'm not even going to get started on how Snow White eludes a string of assassins, because you have to see it to believe it.

But the whole thing terminates in an exchange to the following effect:

Snow White (looking down at the dead body of a dwarf whom she used as a decoy): Aww....
(walks over and picks it up) He shot a hole in my dress. (And it looks like it's going to need washing again too.) Meanie...

^________~ Sick, twisted, wrong, and brilliant... I can't wait to finish this off for you guys. (I'm at least going to try to get to a good break point tonight and send it to Carole so she can start editing while I'm translating the rest...)

**tenjou_sama** · September 15th, 2003, 12:38 AM

Hehe XD

Sure you can send it in installments. It'll be easier for me too...since I won't then have to pump out 60 pages of editing at once XD

**Countess D** · September 15th, 2003, 05:01 AM

Originally posted by Risu-chan:

King to Prince Lui after a long and tangled lecture about how he's been consorting with too many of the wrong kinds of women: "So take that face of yours that's only good for one thing, and seduce that princess and bring her back here! Otherwise I'll never let you set foot in this country again!"
Prince Lui: "If I might be so bold as to venture a single word in defense of my honor..."
(brace for impact)
Prince Lui: "My face isn't my only useful feature. It's *magnificent* when I take all my clothes off too..."

Snow White (looking down at the dead body of a dwarf whom she used as a decoy): Aww....
(walks over and picks it up) He shot a hole in my dress. (And it looks like it's going to need washing again too.) Meanie...

[img]biggrin.gif[/img] Jeje, can't wait for you to post the final work. That sort of twisted comedy is what I need right now [img]tongue.gif[/img]

**Risu-chan** · September 16th, 2003, 02:38 AM

^^;;;; It's going to be a while before part 2 comes along... my mom came over to stay the night so that she could go visit a friend at the hospital tomorrow morning, so I didn't get any translating done tonight, and I've got meetings every other night this week... maybe next week...?

**Alter** · September 16th, 2003, 02:39 AM

Originally posted by Risu-chan:

King to Prince Lui after a long and tangled lecture about how he's been consorting with too many of the wrong kinds of women: "So take that face of yours that's only good for one thing, and seduce that princess and bring her back here! Otherwise I'll never let you set foot in this country again!"
Prince Lui: "If I might be so bold as to venture a single word in defense of my honor..."
(brace for impact)
Prince Lui: "My face isn't my only useful feature. It's *magnificent* when I take all my clothes off too..."

like father like son, I guess^^;; I'm curious of how did the King raise Ludwig.....err, judging from the result (pervert, have interest in morbid things, and a pro in whipping)-- I didn't sure I really want to know ^^;;

hmmm, I'm curious of how Ludwig's mother--that undoubtedly would be very pretty (thank god, Lui doesn't takes his dad's appearance, even though he clearly does take after his perversity), would agree to marry that ugly perv, I mean he even (Spoiler ahead)

<blockquote>spoiler (click to view):<hr size="1"><div class="spoiler" id="37PX4W"> sleep with his son's fiancee (that snow white princess. ewwww, I mean, no morals here? not to mention that she's underage (well, she looks young to me). </div><hr size="1"></blockquote>

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